Sep 18, 2009

How they died...

This is my first attempt at writing a story and hope you would enjoy reading it!! For criticizing, use the comments section :P

PART I

Avoiding deep breaths to be unnoticed, with the dagger firmly in his right hand, he moved forward, towards his goal. Neither the darkness of the deep tunnel nor the freezing water slackened his progress. The dagger was painted with the red color of his previous victim's blood and some blood marks are present on his light blue shirt. Yes, that was the favourite light blue shirt given to him by his sweetheart Sanjana on his birthday, which was just a few weeks back.

At a far distance, Rahul could see a small but bright light source. He thought to himself, that the target cannot escape through the narrow hole. He knew he should surprise the target else he can be overpowered when he reaches the end of the tunnel. Slowly and carefully walking through the stinking water, he continued his movement towards the end of the tunnel.

It was Sept 6th, that he joined the post graduation first year at one of the most prestigious colleges. His friends called him chintu, he was known for his brilliance at academics. He was an introvert, who loved pizzas and playing football. Soon, he came to be known as one of the good guys on the campus.

He could hear some sound now, his eyes became more focussed, and his heart was filled with hatred that was set out to take revenge. He thought to himself, if he could kill Akshay at the entrance of the tunnel just a while ago, he could kill the next person also. These thoughts made him stronger and more determined.

PART II

Rahul slowly became obsessed with football. He practiced every day at the football ground nearby to his college. Except for the trees that surround the ground, it's an entirely barren land. He became friendly with Akshay, who also became a regular to the football ground. Soon, they started sharing their thoughts to each other, frequently used spoke about their childhood and strangely, they had the same tastes as well!!. After some time they became good friends. From then onwards, they regularly met at the football ground.

Rahul was now close to the end of the tunnel, he knows that he can find the person he is desperately trying to kill. His pupils enlarged, his concentration was strong enough to get over the pungent smell of the water around him. The stress filled 5kms run from the football field into this lonely tunnel and the knife cut on his leg did not decrease his energy. He knows he has to stay alive for some more time and fulfil the promise he made.

She was the most beautiful girl on the campus. She was an extrovert in nature and her presence made the atmosphere very joyful. She liked everything and she laughed at everything. But as with anyone else, she had some negative traits. She was selfish in nature!! Hmm.. who is not selfish in this world. She met Rahul for the first time, in the canteen when he spilled the hot curry dish on her dress. Not a nice start to their friendship, but somehow she liked him, because she felt there was something different about him.

Now, blood is oozing out more rapidly and his leg isn't supporting him. He says to himself, that a few more steps and it’s done. His speed decreases as he doesn't want to be surprised by his target. He remembers the advice Sanjana gave to him "be careful, because it's deceptive". He is like a cobra, moving slowly and sensing the environment carefully. He stops frequently to check that there is no escape route and moves ahead slowly.

PART III

Soon, they became good friends and they always used to be together on the campus. Rahul started sharing his school, college experiences etc but never told about Akshay to Sanjana. They spent a lot of time together except in the evenings when Rahul used to go to ground to play football. Sanjana had once asked Rahul to take him to the football and he suddenly became angry and gave a stern look at her. She did not want to disturb his privacy and hence never asked again, but the stern look of Rahul remained in her mind. Anyways she advised Rahul to be careful and cautioned him against any unknown problems. After a few days, it was Rahul's birthday and Sanjana presented him with a light blue shirt.

Still, she was restless about Rahul’s stern look and wanted to know why Rahul never took her to the football ground. So, on Sept 16th, when she finished her regular chit chat with Rahul, she pretended to be unwell and went back to the hostel. Once Rahul started towards the ground, she closely followed him behind the tall pine trees. Since, it was raining; no one came for practice that day. Rahul saw a dagger lying on the path and thought it might be useful for him to cut the large bushes which he encounters just before reaching the football field.

She entered the football field to give a surprise to Rahul. Though Rahul was surprised, he was angry at the same time for the surprise visit. Akshay told to Rahul about the advices he gave to him and told him how Sanjana doubts Rahul’s actions and speaks ill against the female gender. Unable to bear the comments made at her, Sanjana reacted emotionally and in a fit of rage, she slapped him. Akshay, because of his short temper took the dagger from Rahul's hand and runs towards Sanjana.

PART IV

Sanjana ran away from the ground with Akshay in pursuit. Rahul was after Akshay, shouting at him to stop and return. But, Akshay wasn’t in a mood to relent and Sanjana was shouting and crying and ran here and there without any thought of where she was approaching. She entered into one of the deep tunnels. By this time, Rahul caught up Akshay at the entrance of the tunnel and asked him to hand over the dagger. Akshay refused and a fight ensured between the two and accidently Akshay made a cut in Rahul's leg. In the fight that ensured, Rahul by mistake had cut through Akshay's chest and he was profusely bleeding.

Akshay is almost about to die and he tells to Rahul about how he shouldn't trust girls and told him that the present conditions are due to Sanjana's suspicions about Rahul. Rahul felt sorry for his friend's state and with vengeance promised to kill Sanjana. So he went inside the tunnel to kill Sanjana. Sanjana unaware of all these, felt Akshay is coming to kill her and ran inside the tunnel.

Now, Rahul is almost close to the end of the tunnel where Sanjana should be somewhere around. Suddenly he hears some rumbling sound above him. To maintain his balance, he takes support of the wall beside him and touches his shirt. He is shocked; he couldn't believe what he has seen. He says to himself "It can't be, this is impossible". He sees blood on his own hand, he tears open the shirt and he finds a large cut on his chest.

He falls down, he sees around and he doesn't see Sanjana anywhere around. All these days, he played football alone. He was the striker and he was the goalkeeper. There was no Akshay. His introvert feeling and his passion for football needed a friend and hence it was Akshay who filled that gap. There was no Sanjana also; he only needed someone to be with him when he is not playing football. His introvert nature never allowed him to speak to girls and hence Sanjana filled that gap. Since both of them, are so contrasting in nature, his mind isn't receptive to both at the same time. That's why, recently he faced conflicts.

At the ground, these thoughts were too conflicting for him to handle. He slapped himself and thought Akshay slapped Sanjana. At the entrance, he cut himself thinking Akshay did it. When he tried to kill Sanjana, in reality he was trying to kill himself. The chest injury that should be on Akshay was on him and then he realized the truth. These thoughts made him cry, he cried for help but was too far to receive one. Finally, he succumbed to his injuries. That’s how ‘they’ died.




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Urs Ved

Sep 14, 2009

Sweet love of mine...

It's dark, it's lonely,
it's a long way to go,
the moonlight is not
sufficient to lighten up,
I need the brightness of your
face to lighten the path.


The dark clouds
frighten me,
the winds scare me,
the beach makes me feel small,
I need the touch of
your hand to comfort me.


Sleep never comes to me,
cos there's no peace,
food doesn't need me,
cos there's no hunger,
love doesn't come to me,
cos u have taken my heart.



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Sep 7, 2009

Why do I love her? ...

Why do I love her so much?? I was pondering over this for a few weeks before I accepted her. I thought about many things which made me to accept her.

Some of the reasons why i love her are

1. She is charming and hence I fell in instantaneous love with her
2. Touch of her smooth skin makes me feel crazy
3. She mesmerises me with her sweet voice and that's why I often ask her to sing
4. She has a beautiful and wide face
5. She dances with me in parties, she sings when i sing, she makes me smile when I'm moody
6. She never gets angry with me!!
7. She is sleek and very thin which makes me comfortable to take her
8. She looks cool and is advanced compared to her zombie peers
9. Her presence with me makes my friends get envy

I can't explain in words because you need to touch her to know about her!!

Currently I love her very much and plan to stay with her for the next 3-4 years and chances of a marriage with her for a life time looks very remote :( By the way, if you want to know who she is, then just scroll down
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The best bike trip...

Eyes were still opening up from the long sleep, and after numerous attempts, I finally got out of the bed. My stomach gave its SOS signal for food and because of my acrimony towards mess food, Manish and I thought of having lunch at a nearby restaurant (hardly 2kms). After reaching the restaurant, we saw that Murphy's law had affected us !! Now, with some distinct feeling that I had seen a restaurant on the Wayanad road, we thought about going some 4-5kms further to check for any places to eat.

The weather was awesome and with the picturesque ghats infront, it was a lovely sight to watch. So got the strange idea to go further for some more distance and return to campus to have food at NC. After some 8-10 kms, we came across rubber plantations, which made an wonderful visual treat along with the ghats.


Out of curiosity, we asked some passersby about the distance to Tushargiri falls. As they replied that it was 15kms further we thought of visiting the place as we have reached more than half the distance. After some 8kms or so, the skies opened up and continued their relentless showers for the next part of the day. We continued our travel without stopping anywhere in between. We reached some nondescript town and after enquiry we found that there is still 18 more kms to travel!! (BC,MC etc) We were told about two roads that reach to the destination.

Because there was 3 kms difference between the two roads and heavy rains, we took the shorter route. By any means, it cannot be called as a road. It was a long chain of potholes with intermittent presence of tar. But, after some time these potholes vanished and we thought luck was once again shining upon us. But how can Murphy leave us so soon, we experienced almost vertically inclined roads for the rest of the journey. Not only that after every km or so, we find a junction and had to stop at every junction to enquire and proceed further.

After the last enquiry, since it was only 4 kms away we decided to take rest. Hmm...but the rain gods provided no respite to us and after travelling the remaining 4kms, we asked a stranger about tushagiri falls. With a stern look on his face, he said "4 more kms". Now giving all the MC, BC gaali, we finally reached the destination. Since we were damn hungry (our original reason to travel!!), we went to the only hotel present there and ordered for chapati and tomato curry (or is it some red water with 1-2 tomato pieces!!). For the fist time, I felt the mess food was better!!.

Already 6PM, we started our return journey and after some time we met a police vehicle at a junction. When asked how to reach Kunnamangalam, the policewala said "take the left road but we can go by the right one x-(". After our good experience, we decided to take the long route this time and we were back to square one, enquiring and going further. I believe people here underestimate the distance and I have learnt that in a hard way.

After an hour and so, it became dark and because of the absence of streetlights and heavy rains, the visibility was close to zero. Since we took the alternate route during the return journey, we are on an entirely new path altogether and frankly it isn't so easy to travel through frequent S and U turns. By the end of the journey, my thumb finger became numb and I could only hear the horn, not feel it.

But all through the journey, we only laughed. We laughed when the rains came, we shouted like kids when we used to clear the upward slopes, (forgot we went on a 100CC splendor of 2000 model!!!), and though we thought of stopping at some place, we always procrastinated to the next possible place. It's the most memorable bike experience that I ever had in my life. Those 90kms travel in heavy rains, through bad roads, zero visibility, body shivering in the latter part of the journey (wore only shorts n t-shirt!!) is an experience to cherish.

As is always said the unplanned tours are more memorable because of the uncertainty involved in them. More uncertainity (risk), more excitement (return)!!!



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